Friday, January 19, 2007

pg 3 and a few close up

I'm so not to happy with this layout and the story telling and some of the drawings!!GGGRRRRRRR!! a lot of rework is going to happen on this pg on my final pass!!!





14 Comments:

Blogger Ah person said...

nice! these are looking good!

6:11 AM  
Blogger Dennis DeMercer said...

Wow! That's a really smart way to assemble a page. Oh and it looks awesome. Can't wait to see the final.

10:45 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

WOW! Is this for your comic book? Looks really awesome! Save me a copy!

5:09 PM  
Blogger Corey said...

holy smokes!

is this a personal project?

8:08 PM  
Blogger Frank Muñoz said...

I like that page! You are good with the pencils!

12:32 AM  
Blogger Martin Wittig said...

Damn!!! LOOK at all of the GREAT work that i have missed out on! --Awesome work Robin!

12:00 AM  
Blogger Tom said...

These look great! When and where will we get to read this!?

Also, did you contribute to the Low Orbit Anthology coming out this week?

8:40 AM  
Blogger mannisi-axel said...

wow wow!!

10:14 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

wow!!! your pencil is fantastic!!

4:00 AM  
Blogger Marc Deering said...

Beautiful pencils! Is this being inked and what's it for?

7:46 AM  
Blogger Teo Cato said...

Your drawings are beatiful as always, i think there something wrong with the main layout of the page, i mean...it seems like you're putting separate drawings together and that's not so functional in storytelling. Try to feel the meaning of the closure between the different panels, think about your scene as an animation and than choose the layout in function of the story. Your drawings are so alive that is a shame to see them setted in that way. I know that you can do it better!!! Ciao!

6:15 PM  
Blogger Kyle Marshall said...

This looks really cool, great work

3:29 AM  
Blogger flipstudios said...

beautiful pencil work. i really like the wizard character. full of personality. can't wait to see this one on the shelves.

7:46 PM  
Blogger PEPE said...

thanks everyone!! i must admit this has been a tough learning process and will definitely continue to be. I have underestimated what this venture was really going to be like, but the pain is worth it.


hey tom, no i wont be in that issue but i guarantee it's an issue i will be picking up for sure!!
hey marc, it's for low orbit the comic vol 2 hopefully!!
hey teo, oh yeah this totally sucks but there is a new page up thats a lot clearer!! cheers

11:37 PM  

Post a Comment

<< Home